Randy's Graduation Announcement prototype

 

I have been messing around trying to come up with an announcement for Randy's graduation.  These are what I have so far.

 

 The oneabove is actually my favorite, but it's really hard to read what time graduation is.

So, I swapped the font colors around and came up with this.  It's till kind of hard to read.  Not sure what to do.  Going to think on it awhile, but in the meantime, I would love all of your opinions.  I am going to do a double sided announcement, printed on linen.  If my research is correct, this will still actually cost me less than the traditional announcements, and I'll get to show 5 or 6 (or more?) different pictures, which is super cool, I think.
As I said, I would love to hear your opinions!